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Will it be right?

October 5th, 2008 . by Cue Ball

Is this right, or is this wrong.
Time is short, for this song.
To love or bust, in short time.
Will this spend, my last dime.
My last dime, is my love.
Can I find, my only dove.
Short in change, short in love.
Time is close, for giving up.
Let this be, a step up.
I am almost done, trying for love.
Also looking for, my one true dove.
How much longer, can I last.
Over this pain, can I pass.
To move on, or lose my love.
To give up, or find my dove.
This poem, she will see.
For her eyes, this must be.
Loyal I am, loyal I’ll be.
Till I die, I hope she’ll see.

2 Responses to “Will it be right?”

  1. comment number 1 by: Static_Brain

    That is sad. I don’t think you should give up hope. Hang in there. :shock:

  2. comment number 2 by: colleen

    your mom is right. Don’t give up. you deserve so much more. and i am always here if you ever need to talk like we used to :) hugggggs

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